01-07-2017, 06:55 AM
yes, for sure and thanks for asking.
I am working on a short story somewhat involving motorcycling and I felt it was getting too wordy. The above story was something of an exercise for me to see if I could pare a much longer narrative into a paragraph that had enough emotion and imagery to keep a reader's interest and with an opening and conclusion that could be easily understood from my words or at least inferred by them.
I am working on a short story somewhat involving motorcycling and I felt it was getting too wordy. The above story was something of an exercise for me to see if I could pare a much longer narrative into a paragraph that had enough emotion and imagery to keep a reader's interest and with an opening and conclusion that could be easily understood from my words or at least inferred by them.