Thinking of a new gadget...

[GoldOxide_imp]

Csory:

V1.01 of the document is indeed an improvement over the first draft.
[ul] [li]I agree with max regarding the "brain module". Consider "Core Module" or similar for a more professional read.[/li] [li]There are still some cosmetic / document formatting changes that can improve readability, but this is probably best done maybe via a shared document (e.g. Google Docs, etc.) where suggested edits can be tracked and approved/declined.[/li] [li]Also as max indicated, cold engine ("Flowchart of operation") might be firmware event that could be unnecessary. Consider reviewing.[/li] [li]I know you are a very nice person. However, consider removing all instances of "please" from the documentation.[/li] [li]May as well make the first page an active Table of Content pointing to each sub-document and list only the start page, i.e. the page of the sub-document's Table of Contents. Remove the range of pages on the first page.
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